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i've been writing songs and poems since i was 12 but i'm painfully shy so probably no one will ever read thembiggrin


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Sounds like Shania........

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Country gal wrote:

i've been writing songs and poems since i was 12 but i'm painfully shy so probably no one will ever read thembiggrin



So have I. I am also painfully introverted but found the courage to post mine. You should go for it. Unless you let others read them what good are they doing in a drawer? Take a chance. I'd like to read someone else's stuff for a change. I see my own all the time. What's the worst that can happen. Someone doesn't like it. Well you know what if they do post and say they don't like it ask them to do better. If they do do better then oh well that's life besides I'm sure yuo didn't start writing for the praise or attention. You do it because you love doing it and it is something that helps you to deal with whatever you need to deal with. Things I can't say to someone can come out in this form. It has to come out somewhere and somehow and we only live once. Please share with us.
Warmest regards as always,
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So have I. I am also painfully introverted but found the courage to post mine. You should go for it. Unless you let others read them what good are they doing in a drawer? Take a chance. I'd like to read someone else's stuff for a change. I see my own all the time. What's the worst that can happen. Someone doesn't like it. Well you know what if they do post and say they don't like it ask them to do better. If they do do better then oh well that's life besides I'm sure yuo didn't start writing for the praise or attention. You do it because you love doing it and it is something that helps you to deal with whatever you need to deal with. Things I can't say to someone can come out in this form. It has to come out somewhere and somehow and we only live once. Please share with us.
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto



Thanks Tonto for your words,
i might try it some day,but first i have to find my writings,they are probably in the bottom of some drawer.
i don't care if someone won't like them,i'm just too shy to let some certain people read them.



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Just thought I'd give you something else to read to get through the Shanialess days while we do what we have been doing for a long time wait. We sit and wait. Oh but it is so worth the wait. Wrote this one when I found out about the divorce. Such a sad time.cry Enjoy!!

What happens when Forever doesnt mean Forever Anymore

What happens when forever doesnt mean forever anymore

When all you can hear is the sound of a slammin door

What happens when forever runs out

And lovers whispers turn into angry shouts

I just dont understand

How did we let this get so far out of hand

Why did we have to find

That theres such a thin line

Between love and hate

When did we forget how to communicate

Now theres more than just us left devastated

Just look at this mess weve created

From a happy fairytale to an endless tragedy

When did you stop loving me

When will my shattered heart ever mend

Will I ever be able to trust in forever again

Tell me what happens when forever doesnt mean forever anymore

When all you can hear is the sound of a slammin door


Warmest regards as always,
Tonto



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Thought I would give you another little something to read while we pass the Shanialess time. Wrote this afterthe depressing no cd announcement deal when lots of people over here were attacking each other over stupid stuff and I was angry with myself for not being able to stop being a fan of Shania's and was angry at her for not letting me go. Enjoy!!!

Your Memory Just Wont Let Me Go

I ran into an old friend just the other day
Tried not to think of you but there was just no way
Your memory just wont let me go
I try to hide the pain and hope it doesnt show
Hidden from the world I dont want anyone to know
Your memory just wont let me go
I keep it all bottled up inside
I cant escape your memory theres nowhere left for me to hide
I close my eyes and your face is all I can see
And in the dark and endless night the memories wont stop haunting
me
I can still see your face as you turned and walked out my door
I can still hear the sound of my heart as it fell and shattered on the floor
Oh please tell me I really need to know
When will your memory ever let me go
Why cant your memory just leave me all alone
Why cant it be more like you and walk out the door and just be gone
Oh please tell me I really need to know
When will your memory ever let me go

Warmest regards as always,
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Here is something new for you to read. It's still a little boring as we wait for word on whether or not she will be
at the awards in April and the George StraitTribute show. Wrote this after listening to I wanna Know you that good. Thank you for the inspiration Shania!!Enjoy!!

Wanna Be the Only One

I wanna be the one you cant live without
I wanna be the one youre always dreaming about
I wanna be the one to hold you when you cry
And Ill be the one to love you till the day we die
I wanna be your everything
Wanna be the one who makes your heart sing
Wanna give you all the joy that our love can bring
I wanna be the only one who makes your heart race
I wanna be the one who keeps that smile on your face
I wanna be the one to taste the rain on your lips
And I wanna be the only one to feel the love in your fingertips
I wanna be the one to love you like youve never been loved before
I wanna be the one you say youll love forevermore
I wanna be the one you cant live without
I wanna be the one youre always dreaming about
I wanna be the only one for you
I wanna be the only one you run to
I wanna be the only one you give your love to

Warmest regards as always,
Tonto
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beautiful Tonto

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Thanks Lulu. Wish someone else would post something.
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto

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Time for something else to read to pass the Shanialess time away. Wrote this one when I was angry. I was questioning why I couldn't just stop being her fan. I was angry at myself and her for not letting me go. I was angry about all the new album no new album rumors.
Enjoy!!


Your Memory Just Wont Let Me Go

I ran into an old friend just the other day
Tried not to think of you but there was just no way
Your memory just wont let me go
I try to hide the pain and hope it doesnt show
Hidden from the word I dont want anyone to know
Your memory just wont let me go
I keep it all bottled up inside
I cant escape your memory theres nowhere left for me to hide
I close my eyes and your face is all I can see
And in the dark and endless night the memories wont stop haunting me
I can still see your face as you turned and walked out my door
I can still hear the sound of my heart as it fell and shattered on the floor
Oh please tell me I really need to know
When will your memory ever let me go
Why cant your memory just leave me all alone
Why cant it be more like you and walk out the door and just be gone
Oh please tell me I really need to know
When will your memory ever let me go

Warmest regards as always,
Tonto



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Time for something new to read. Wrote this oneafter listening to Party for 2 with Billy Currington. Hope you enjoy it!!

I Hate You Sometimes Because I Love you so Much

Baby I hate to have to confess
That since I met you my life is such a mess
Your love has got me feelin this way
And I really just have this to say
I hate you sometimes because I love you so much
And I know that I just cant live a day without your loving touch
And I know my pride is the reason that I hate to have to concede
Youre not exactly what I want but I know that youre exactly what I need
And this is my best attempt to bring you up to speed
So in the middle of the night
When I let you hold me tight
Theres nothin I would rather do
Then be this vulnerable for you
My instincts tell me that I should run and hide
But I open up my heart and let you deep inside
The longer that we are together
The more I want to believe in forever
I never ever wanted to feel this way
I never thought Id see this day
The closer you get the harder I try to push you away
And as you lie here in my arms, heart to heart
I have just one thing to say
I hate you sometimes because I love you so much
I hate myself for loving you
Now theres nothing that I can do
I kept my guard up night and day
Because I never wanted to feel this way
I hate you sometimes because I love you so much
I hate knowing that I cant live without your touch
I hate you sometimes because I love you so much

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Tonto








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Bored, bored.  Ho hum.  Need something new to read.  Wrote this one after listening to Leavin' is the only way out.  Enjoy!!

            Don’t Wanna Wake up to One More Night Of Loving You 

Don’t wanna wake up to one more night of missing you
I just don’t know what I’m gonna do
I wake up and wonder where you are
Are you alone or hangin’ out in your favorite bar
I wake up and look around this lonely room
I wonder are you intoxicated by the smell of someone else’s cheap perfume
I wish that I could be a fly on the wall
To watch you spin your web of lies to make her fall
Don’t wanna wake up to one more night of missing you
Don’t wanna wake up to one more night of this hell I’m going through
Don’t wanna wake up to one more night of loving you
I wanna find a love I can trust who will be true
Don’t wanna wake up and wonder what might have been
Don’t wanna wake up to the same old lies all over again
I’ll just have to close my eyes and dream of the night when
I don’t wake up to another night of missing you
No I don’t wanna wake up to another night of this hell you put me
through
And no I don’t wanna wake up to another night of loving you

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Too much time on our hands with nothing new to discuss and people are starting to get evil around here again. furious I hate that!!  Here is something newfor you to read.  Hopefully it will redirect some of the hostility.  I can take it criticize away boys!!
Enjoy!!!!

            I Just Wanna be Loved By You

At the end of another long and lonely day
And all I really wanna do is hear you say
Welcome home baby you’re back right where you belong
I wanna run into your waiting arms and let you hold me all night long
You are my shelter from the storm
Your love keeps me safe and warm
When the world is cold and cruel
I just wanna stay home and be your fool
Your love is the only thing worth living for
Doesn’t matter what this world has in store
No matter where we go or what we do
I just wanna be loved by you
In your arms everything seems so clear
You take away all of my fear
Everything you say is so sincere
I wanna feel your heart beating next to mine
Baby in your arms there’s no sense of time
Your love has become my only lifeline
No matter where we go or what we do
I just wanna be loved by you
At the end of another long and lonely day
And all I really wanna do is hear you say
Is welcome home baby you back right where you belong
I wanna run into your arms and let you hold me all night long
Cause your love is what keeps me so strong
And no matter where we go or what we do
I just wanna be loved by you
Warmest regards as always,Tonto



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Something new for you to ponder as we wait for news.  I wrote this one after watching the movie Fireproof and thinking about how hard it must have been to let go of a marriage and love after 15 years and wondering why Mutt and Shania couldn't have tried the love dare.  Enjoy!!

Dare Me Not to Love You

Standing here today if you could hear my heart speak, you would hear it say
Dare me not to love you with a heart so true
Dare me not to love you when the storms roll through
Take these words with you into your heart and soul, no matter where you go or what
you do
And when the darkness surround you I will always be right there, I will be a shining light and I will always care
And so now I challenge you to also take this love dare
Dare me not to love you with this heart so true
Give me your hand and say that you believe that we can make this love brand new
I never want to hear you say that you think that we are through
Dare me not to love you with a heart so true
Close your eyes and tell me that you still believe
Open up your heart to all the love you can receive
Then dare me not to love you when the storms roll through
Just you dare me not to love you



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Bored to death.  Thought you might need something new to read.  I wrote this one while listening to C'est la vie. " What a dumb day " rhymed with Someday and it stuck in my brain.  Someday I'll see her in concert.  Enjoy!!

                      Someday

I saw you walk in the room
Wearin’ his diamond and some sweet perfume
You were just standing there
You didn’t catch my stare
You just ran right by
 And I thought I’d die
‘Cause Someday you’re gonna see
He’s not all he pretends to be
Someday he’s gonna leave
But right now you won’t believe
So I’ll just wait right here and bide my time
‘Cause someday you’re gonna be mine
Someday you’re gonna see
Everything you need in me
Someday you’re gonna see
Everything true love can be
Someday you’re gonna see
What my love can do
Someday you’re gonna see
That my heart is true
Someday you’re gonna see
You should’ve been lovin’ me
Someday you’re gonna see
You should’ve been lovin’ me
Until someday comes don’t know what I’m gonna do
Until someday comes I’ll still be lovin’ you
Someday you’re gonna see
You should’ve been lovin’ me
Warmest regards as always,Tonto



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Damn! You are bored!

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Boredom is simply a state of mind Tonto..I am NEVER bored .It must feel horrible..Like I have said..I love bobby land

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Tonto, you have some good talent at being creative and writing your thoughts to poem.

Write a poem about Kevy and his contribution as a Shania fan who tells it like it is.
Be nice to Kevy in your poem.

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I think if you thought about the person deserving of a poem it might be Tommy, who has overcome many obstacles in his life and is able to use a computer with his disabilities, which I still find hard to comprehend.

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I think if you thought about the person deserving of a poem it might be Tommy, who has overcome many obstacles in his life and is able to use a computer with his disabilities, which I still find hard to comprehend.




 Lighten up purple man, it was a joke.
I was kidding around with Tonto.
Tonto has a passion for Shania and thats who inspires her poems.
I didnt' exactly expect her to write a poem about me lol!!!!



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EveryBodyLovesKevy wrote:

PurplePeopleEater wrote:

I think if you thought about the person deserving of a poem it might be Tommy, who has overcome many obstacles in his life and is able to use a computer with his disabilities, which I still find hard to comprehend.



Sorry guys inspiration doesn't work that way.  Can't pick and choose subjects or when it happens it just happens.  Wish I could do requests.  Sometimes I can but it is very rare and it has to be something that really reaches out to me.
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto

 Lighten up purple man, it was a joke.
I was kidding around with Tonto.
Tonto has a passion for Shania and thats who inspires her poems.
I didnt' exactly expect her to write a poem about me lol!!!!




 



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However you do it Tonto it works very well!

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However you do it Tonto it works very well!



Thanks Purple!! I don't think they are any better than the others I have read posted on other sites. 
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto

 



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Here is something else for you to read while we wait.  I was listening to the old album and song Don't give me that once over.  Her attitude inspired this one.
Enjoy!!

Defenses 

You don’t want me in your heart
There’s a battle deep inside and it’s ripping you apart
You hate it that you’ve finally found someone who makes you lose
control
Of all your senses
You know I’m the one who’s gonna tear down all of your defenses
You don’t want to look into my eyes
‘Cause then you’ll realize
That in the middle of the night
You wish you were holding me so tight
And I know you hate me hangin’ around too much
Because eventually your gonna be so addicted to my touch
So when you let me in
That’s when it will begin
I know you don’t want me hangin’ around
Because I can steal your heart without makin’ a sound
There’s no place left to hide
I know there are others who have tried
To get into your heart but you didn’t let them inside
Now it’s time for them to watch and learn
As I light a match and watch it burn
‘Cause I’m gonna take you past the point of no return
I can feel it in your kiss, you’re starting to get weak
And sometimes the words won’t come and it’s hard for you to speak
But I can see it in your eyes
As you start to realize
You can’t resist
The feel of my touch or the taste of my kiss
It’s only a matter of time
You know you’re gonna be mine
So give up your fight
Come and hold me tight
Let me take you places that you’ve never been
Our love is gonna grow
We can take it slow
‘Cause I already know
You don’t want me in your heart
There’s a battle going on and it’s ripping you apart
You hate it that you’ve finally found someone who makes you lose control of all your senses
And you know I’m the one who’s gonna tear down all of your defenses
You don’t want me in your heart
And it’s ripping you apart
Just let me in
I’ll take you places that you’ve never been
Just let me in your heart

Warmest regards as always,
Tonto



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Here is one that is a little different.  It is written from Mutt and Shania's perspectives of wonder if she/he still wants me.  Written after a conversation in pm with someone who asked me if I thought Shania still wished she and Mutt were still togehter.  Food for thouhgt.  Enjoy!!

                When Will Her Memory be Gone 

        He doesn’t want her to know that he still wants and needs her
        in his life
        She doesn’t want him to know that she still wishes she was his    
        wife 
        She can’t let go of the hurt and the pain
        And sometimes the tears still fall like the rain
        He was never very good at showing his emotions 
        And she’s cried enough tears to fill an ocean
        But pride gets in the way 
        And it seems there are no words left to say
        As the distance between them grows farther every day
        She knows she’ll never forgive him for the thing he couldn’t resist
       And she can’t admit to herself that she still longs for his kiss
        The nights never seem to end
       And he knows he’s lost more than his lover, she was his best
       friend
      Oh the countless nights that she’s spent awake
      Trying to understand the reason for his worst mistake
      He thinks back to the rings of gold
      And the promise of another heart to hold
      How much weakness does it take
      To drop that heart and watch it break
      Could she ever trust in him again
      Will she always wonder what might have been
      Will she ever love anyone so deep
      Why is this the promise he couldn’t keep
      He thinks about the sweet love they used to make
     And he wonders how much more he can take
     Did he turn her heart into stone
     When will her memory ever be gone
     Without her there his house is not a home
     He just can’t stand to be all alone
     When will her memory be gone
     She can’t take it anymore 
     The pain it hurts down to the core
      When will his memory be gone
      She can’t stand another night alone
      Like a knife it cuts her to the bone
      When will his memory be gone
      Did he turn her heart into stone 
      When will her memory be gone
     Without her here his house is not a home
     He just can’t stand to be all alone
    When will her memory be gone
    When will his memory be gone


Warmest regards as always,
Tonto

-- Edited by Tonto on Saturday 18th of April 2009 10:47:51 PM

-- Edited by Tonto on Saturday 18th of April 2009 10:59:25 PM

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nice work Tonto

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seems you have an interest in this stuff tonto, so keep up the great work!!!!!!

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Thanks for the kind words.  This is how I express myself.  I enjoy it but at times it can make you feel very vulnerable especially posting them for everyone to read.  Hope maybe someday she will read just one and have something to say.  Not exactly up to her calibur but it was inspired by her so that is something in itself.
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto


-- Edited by Tonto on Sunday 19th of April 2009 02:52:07 PM

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I guess im not that imaginative to ever come up with stuff like that.Did you ever study writing or does it just come naturally?

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I've always been able to do it.  I've been doing it a long time.  Can't sing or play an instrument but I love using words.  I always carry a pen and paper with me.

Warmest regards as always,
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Thats cool,i thought maybe you took a creative writing course,your good at it.

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Thanks!!
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto

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Not exactly directly related to Shania but so inkeeping with this thread----

I Think a Thought, I say a Word

I thought I heard, I thought I said
I thought I heard a word I said
I think a thought, I say a word
I think my thoughts in words I've heard
To think a thought without a word
That thought, It simply goes unheard
The word, the sound, the language spoken
Is thought processes Unawoken
Static thought from language written
pre-fab culture for the Children
The word was there from the beginning
The ancients knew, they thought in symbols
Flesh from the word, decoded mind
A logic system old as time
All the thoughts fall into line
A process used in lieu of might
Uncouple thought from sounds we utter
Awaken minds and thought will flourish
To think one thought without a word
I think that thought would be superb
I think a thought, I say a word
I thought this thought in words I've heard.


No clue who the writer is-----But So Profound!!!




-- Edited by KatieIsKevysNo1Fan on Friday 24th of April 2009 10:40:15 AM

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Good poem Katie I love it. The power of words is awesome.
Warmest regards as always,
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I have to say you are both very talented.

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Lilly wrote:

I have to say you are both very talented.



Thanks Lilly.  Nice to have you here.  Welcome.
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto

 



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Do you guys do fan fic here? I've got some fan fic stories based on Shania/Mutt, but I can change the names. I've been posting them elsewhere, but I like to have interaction of people.

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Do you guys do fan fic here? I've got some fan fic stories based on Shania/Mutt, but I can change the names. I've been posting them elsewhere, but I like to have interaction of people.



Go for it,i would be interested in reading them.

 



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kay1017us wrote:

Do you guys do fan fic here? I've got some fan fic stories based on Shania/Mutt, but I can change the names. I've been posting them elsewhere, but I like to have interaction of people.



Go for it,i would be interested in reading them.

 



You don't have to change the names.  Loved reading your stories over at the Shania forums until they made you stop and have to e-mail them to people.  I am not a member over there so I was just viewing them.  Would love to finish reading them.   Not as strict over here so you can leave Mutt and Shania stories as they are we all know the difference between fiction and the truth.
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto

 



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Here is another one to read.  I worte this one after surfing the net and seeing article about Shania in the early days of her career and the article was comparing her career to a runaway Train.  Enjoy!!


                                 When it Comes to Loving You 

        When it comes to loving you 
        I’ve got a one track mind
        When it comes to loving you 
        I’m like a runaway train speedin’ down the line
        I’ve never felt this way before
        Couldn’t ask for anything more
        ‘Cause when it comes to lovin’ you
        It’s the best thing that I’ll ever do
        When it comes to lovin’ you
         I’ve got a one track mind
        When it comes to loving you
        A heart that’s true is what you’ll find
        When it comes to loving you
        There’s no holdin’ back
        I’m a speedin’ locomotive tearin’ up the tracks
        I can feel the pressure building
        You’re gonna cause a heart attack
        I can hear the whistle blowin’
       With each kiss my love is growin’
        In my eyes the future’s showin
        Just close your eyes and you will see
        That when it comes to loving you, you’ve got the best of me
        When it comes to lovin’ you
        I’ve got a one track mind
        When it comes to lovin’ you
        I’m like a runaway train
        Speedin’ down the line
        I’ve never felt this way before
       Couldn’t ask for anything more
       When it comes to loving you
       I’ve never felt this way before
      Couldn’t ask for anything more
      When it comes to loving you

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When It comes to Loving you.

I love  all your work  Tonto but this one especially expresses my own feelings for 'some-one special'. Thank you for writing and posting it. smile


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kay1017us wrote:

Do you guys do fan fic here? I've got some fan fic stories based on Shania/Mutt, but I can change the names. I've been posting them elsewhere, but I like to have interaction of people.



I really enjoyed reading your Stories at the forums too Kay. You are very creative smile

 



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KatieIsKevysNo1Fan wrote:

When It comes to Loving you.

I love  all your work  Tonto but this one especially expresses my own feelings for 'some-one special'. Thank you for writing and posting it. smile



You are welcome but as you know you have to thank my ghost writer so to speak and you know who that is don't you?  Ha!!  The one and only who also inspired it.  Shania!!
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto

 



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Looks like we have a bunch of creative writers,we will be waiting.

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Here is another one to read.  It was also inspired by Shania.
Enjoy!!!

Without You
I don’t know what I’m gonna do
Because without you there’s no smile on my face
And my heart is just an empty space
Without you
I don’t want to feel the warmth of the sun
I’ve got nowhere left to run
Please don’t let this be said and done
I just can’t take this anymore
I don’t care what the future has in store
Without you my life seems so bleak
There are no words left to speak
Without you the nights go by so slow
There’s nowhere I want to go
Without you
I can’t eat and I can’t sleep
There are no promises left to keep
Without you
There’s no moon up in the sky
There’s only tears left for me to cry
Without you
There’s no smile on my face
And my heart is just an empty space
Love has left without a trace
Without you
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto

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If I post some stories, where should I post them? In this thread?

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Start a new thread so they will be easy for us to find. It will help with being able to keep it all together so we can read them in sections of if you can post all at one time would be great.
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto


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Here is another poem inspired by Shania.  I wrote it for the Mother's Day Contest.  Didn't win it but that's Ok as I am just glad that it inspired me to write this for my Mom who is the absoulute best.  She hasn't read it yet as I am waiting until tomorrow to give it to her.  Enjoy!!

          My Momma’s Love 

My mom she’s struggled and worked hard for so long
So that her family could grow and always be strong
She’s worked and sacrificed almost all her life
Struggling to be the best mom and a wife
Sometimes it seemed she never got time to rest
Tryin’ to make sure we always had the best
No time for herself
Never asking anyone for help
Never saw a time when she seemed weak
And for all her work nothing in return does she seek
And in her eyes you can see the love
And I know she must be an angel sent straight from God above
And there’s nothing stronger than a mother’s love
She works her fingers to the bone to make this house a home
And if love had the value of money I could never give her enough
Because there is nothing that is worth more than a mother’s love
She dreams with me
She cries with me
She does everything you see
Because she loves me
In times of darkness she’s my guiding light
She’s always taught me wrong from right
Was always there to pick me up when I fell
Knows all my secrets, she’ll never tell
She’s always been my best friend
For me her love has no end
And if I had a million lifetimes to spend
I could never pay her back again
And don’t ever get her riled
Especially when it involves her child
‘Cause she’ll give it her all
And nail you to the wall
Because that’s a mother’s love
And I know she’s an angel that God sent me straight from above
I know because that’s the miracle of my momma’s love

I would like to wish all the Moms out there a very special and Happy Mother's Day!! You truly are a special blessing from above.  To Shania and all the Moms I hope that you are surrounded by love and smothered in hugs and kisses on this very special day and all the days that follow.

Warmest regards as always,

Tonto

 



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Do you guys know what happened to my story? Did the moderator delete it?



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Hey kay1017us,
Don't know you would have to ask Tommy.  I read it.  I know it was here the other day.  Maybe he moved it to another thread.
Warmest regards as always,
Tonto



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